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信息时代,报纸是否应该被取代?对此当然争议很多。作者对两种对立的看法分别进行了讨论,最后表明自己的立场。
本文的开场白写得非常成功,娓娓道来,引人入胜。对两种立场的论述虽笔墨略过于均匀,但说理基本让人信服。总结性呈辞起到了一定的深化主题的作用。
通篇思路清晰,文风朴实,语言通顺,只是有少数过长的句子以及中文式表达要改进。另有些句子中断句太多,影响了意义的流畅,也显得烦琐。如“Compared with other ways of media,computer,for instance,through which we can get everything we want tO know with only a little tapping Of our fingers,is superior.”又如:“Qulte on the contrary,others hold the opinion that even with the development“science and technology,newspaper,as symbol Of the traditional media,won,t disappear,for some Of“s advantages can't be replaced.”